某对外发行的英文刊物正在进行中学生英语征文，请根据下列提示，以Don’t Loe Your Courage为题写一篇短文，以便向该刊投稿。
[提示]
1. 上高一的第一天；
2. 英语老师刘老师面带微笑进入教室；
3. 她自我介绍，应称呼她Mi Liu，而非Teacher Liu；
4. 要求我们每人到教室前自我介绍；
5. 我又怕又羞难以启齿；
6. 老师鼓励我，我讲得很好；
7. 难忘的第一节课；
8. 实践出真知。遇到困难不能灰心丧气。
[注意]
1. 词数100~140；
2. 不要逐字翻译提示，可适当增加细节使文章连贯。
[学生原文]
Don’t Loe Your Heart
Never I hall（1） forget the firt Englih leon at Senior One given by Mi Liu. When he entered into（2） the claroom， we found that he wa beautiful with a mile on her face. Then he introduced herelf， aying that we hould call her Mi Liu intead of Teacher Liu.
A moment later， he aked every（3） of u to go to the blackboard to ay omething about themelve（4） . When it wa my turn， I felt o hyly（5） and fearful that I couldn’t peak a word out. Mi Liu came to me and aid kindly， Don’t be afraid. Have a try. I believe you can do it well. My face turned red hearing that. At lat， I went to the blackboard and wa able to do it very well.WWw.hAOzuowEn.com
Up to now， I can till remember her word in my Englih（6） leon：Practice make perfect. Never loe your heart when you meet with difficultie. Try on and on until you ucceed.
[名师点评]
作者能根据提示，运用所学知识得体地进行语言表达。故事行文流畅，要点齐全。运用了复杂的语言结构，作者大胆地使用了现在分词，使短文紧凑，短文的开头使用了When……Then……，A moment later等过渡词，使用恰当，使短文情节逐层深入，作者在第二段最后使用了wa able to为短文添彩。
但有几处错误，现概括如下：
（1）短文首句使用了倒装句，给人以深刻的印象，部分时间状语，副词提前，谓语动词应倒装，应改为Never hall I forget…。
（2）用法错误，enter含有go into的意思，所以应删除into.
（3）every改为each， every是形容词，each是代词。
（4）themelve改为ourelve.因为故事使用第一人称叙述了发生在我班上的情况。
（5）hyly改为hy.feel是系动词，应接形容词作表语。
（6）在Englih前加firt，表示特定的第一节英语课。
[精品范文]
Don’t Loe Your Courage
Never hall I forget the firt Englih leon given by Mi Liu. On that day， when he entered the claroom， we found that he wa a young and beautiful lady with a big mile on her face. Then he introduced herelf aying that we hould call her Mi Liu intead of Teacher Liu， a moment later， he let all of u go to the blackboard and ay omething about ourelve in Englih in turn. When it wa my turn， I felt o hy and fearful that I didn’t dare to ay a word before the cla. She came up to me and aid kindly， Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do it. Come and have a try. My face turned red when I heard that. At lat， I went to the blackboard and wa able to do it quite well. She praied for what I had done. Up to now， I can till remember her word in the firt Englih leon： Practice make perfect. Don’t loe your courage when you meet with difficultie. Try on and on until you ucceed.